英语六级写作范文范例

英语六级考试就要到了，不少考生还在担心自己的六级作文。下面，小编送上两篇英语六级写作范文，供大家参考。

　　英语六级写作范文一

Directions ： For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Do Lucky Numbers Really Bring Good Luck?

You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below ：

1.有些人认为某些数字会带来好运

2.也有些人认为数字和运气无关

3.试说明你的看法

　Do Lucky Numbers Really Bring Good Luck?

As regards lucky numbers, there has been a heated discussion amons the general public in our society. Some people believe that lucky numbers will bring them good luck. According to a recent survey conducted by CCTV, a high proportion (86. 5 percent) of people spare much money to get their telephone numbers or car numbers to include the number “8"，which, for them, means making a fortune.

By contrast, others hold that such kind of idea only caters to psy­chological need and is purely misleading. Numbers alone can never bring good luck to a person at all without his real ead, many count their good fortune on lucky numbers just to get a disap­pointing result.

As far as I am concerned，I would lend my support to the second opinion because I firmly believe that “ Opportunities are only for the prepared mind”. Only when every member of the society makes efforts to win luck with his own hands can we expect him to forget about the lucky numbers. (165 词)

　一句话点评

毫无疑问，第一段的一个百分比吸引了阅卷老师的眼球。 conduct, a high proportion of, spare much money 等词和短语的运用， 给阅卷老师留下良好的第一印象。注意:该篇文章是个例外，将“一 句话”放在了第一段，是因为很容易举出数字的`例子来说明“有些人 认为某些数字会带来好运”的论点,传统思维中，一想到数字和运气, 总会想起8或6等;而相反第二段反对这种观点则不好构思例子。

快捷构思

第一段:在模板句引入话题后接着提出首段中心“有些人认为 某些数字会带来好运”。而后“一句话”数例为具体现车牌号含有“ 8 ”这个数字，希望自己能走运。

第二段:开门见山展现段落中心“有些人认为数字和运气无i关”，并用 Numbers alone can never bring good luck to a person at all without his real efforts 来支持这个观点。

第三段:直接展现自己的观点，并提出一个简要的原因•• Oppor­tunities are only for the prepared mind.

　美丽词句

r to psychological need 满足心理上的需求

ly misleading 完全误导人的

efforts 真正的努力(优于 hard work)

to get a disappointing result 而仅仅得到一个失望的结果(不定式在这里表结果，是绝大部分同学不会主动使用 的表达)

5. Opportunities are only for the prepared mind.机会留给有准备的人。(谚语的使用也是文章的一个亮点)

　　英语六级写作范文二

Directions： For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a com­position on the topic Should One Expect Reward When Doing a Good Deed? You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below ：

1.有的人认为应该有回报

2.另外的人认为应该像雷锋一样不要回报

3.我的看法

Should One Expect Reward When Doing a Good Deed?

As regards reward when doing a good deed, there has been a heated discussion among; the general public in our society. People who believen its necessity argue that without proper reward,those who have done good deeds may sometimes be at a loss in finding themselves sacrifice a lot while others show much indifference.

By contrast, others hold that reward when doing a good deed is of no necessity. According to a recent survey conducted by China Daily, a high proportion (83.8 percent) of people believe that we should learn from Lei Feng, who has long been set as an out­standing example to encourage us to spare no efforts to help those in need，without ever asking for any reward. In their opinion， helping others is an indispensable part of virtues.

As far as I am concerned, rewards are by no means the trigger or purpose of conducting good deeds. What really matters is that we should take the initiative to help others who are in trouble. (166 词)

　“一句话”点评

毫无疑问,第二段的一个百分比和大写的Chirui抓住了阅卷老师的眼球。同时还使用了 conduct, a high proportion of等好词和 who引导的非限制性定语从句,这将给阅卷老师留下良好的第一印 象。注意:比较对照型的第一段有一个比较长的模板句，所以建议把 “ 一句话”放在第二段，或具体呈现现象’或作为数例支持前面论点。

快捷构思

如本范文第一、二、三段篇幅对比和划线部分模板词句所示， 比较对照型的整篇构思清晰明了。而且，除第一段第一句为模板 句引入话题外，其他段落首句皆为段落中心句(即题目所给提纲)， 第一段的第二句前半句紧跟着为段落中心，完全符合“黄金3原 则”的谋篇原则。

第一段:在模板句引人话题后接着提出首段中心“有的人认为 做好事应该有回报”，并用一负面假设说出不好结果 来支持段落中心。

第二段:开门见山展现段落中心“有些人认为做好事应该不要 回报”。而后“一句话”数例支持前面论点,说明大多数的人支持这一观点。

最后一句同义说明：帮助他人 是不可缺少的美德。 第三段:直接展现自己观点，倡导我们大家帮助那些需要帮助 的人。

　　美丽词句

at a loss 迷茫

set as an example 被树立为榜样

e no efforts to 不遗余力

spensable 不可缺少的(优于 necessary，important 等表达

no means绝不是(强调语气，比普通的“not”更能准确传 达思想)

the initiative起带头作用，倡导