美國留學弊端

想要去美國留學的同學們是否還在為不知如何撰寫推薦信而煩惱，就此yjbys小編簡要介紹兩篇留學美國留學推薦信範文，大家可以參考一下!

某同學,於某年某月考入某中學高中部的一班就讀,我有幸成了她高中階段第一任班主任、第一任語文老師、第一任年級組長，得以熟悉並瞭解她。

她有着強烈的進取心和求知慾，並且很獨立、很主動地設計着自己的人生。她不喜歡輕易跟着別人轉。在會考結束後大多數學生都去狂歡放鬆的時候，她選擇了暑期語言進修。這使她後來的中文成績、英文成績在年級近千名學生中一直遙遙領先。她很擅長寫作，這除了得益於她的想象力和創造力，更多依賴於她思維的個性和深度。她的隨筆有一種獨特的韻味和有別於常人的思考，她不喜歡寫空話，無論是寫自己生活的瑣屑，還是發表對他人、對時事的看法，她絕對説真話。

所以她的文章總是吸引很多人，大家還常常被她文章中的悲憫情懷所打動，一個被辭退的教師，一位答不上題的同學，一隻流浪的貓等等，都會讓她頓生惻隱之心。更難得的.是，她還剖析這些事件背後的文化意義，這就使得她身上散發着一種古老的人文精神，和她的獨立態度和自由精神一樣，這是她超越同屆學生們的地方。作為一名熱愛讀書的女生，她有很敏感的心，對語言尤其有一種細膩而透徹的悟性，這使得她的文字温婉而不失一種張力。

她熱愛團隊，有較強的合作能力和組織能力。她是學生會社團部部長，曾策劃了社團一系列活動，這也顯示出她潛藏的領導才華;另外，興趣的廣泛和知識的豐富，以及對工作、對生活的熱情，也使得她在同學羣中頗受歡迎。

因為讀書和隨筆的原因，我們走得較近，她的聰慧、熱情以及誠實、勤勉，給我留下了很好的印象;並且教學相長，她在某種程度上也促進了我教學的發展。所以在此我誠摯推薦她入貴校學習，並期待着她的學業、她的人生在更大的空間裏有着更大的發展。

Dear sir/madam:

It is my pleasure to write this recommendation letter for myintelligent student, XX XX. He/she is not only diligent but also good moral inour school. I will be very glad if my recommendation can help your evaluationof his/her capability.

I am the principle of the XXXX High School, which is a keyhigh school in XXXX province recent years, the 100 percent graduates fromour school have been enrolled by university, and in addition, 80% graduates inour school have been recruited by national key university. I got to knowhim/her as a student of our school. He/she has been keeping a good balancebetween the arts and sciences, gaining high grades in each of them. Because ofhis/her diligent studying, he/she was titled several times“exemplary student”“excellent student cadres” “various abilities in a major”. More importantly,he/she owns the industriousness and inquisitiveness in learning, and an unusualability of abstract and analytical thinking and in-depth exploration of to his/her outstanding performance in studying, in every semester, his/her ranking grade never fell down below top 5 in his/her grade.

At the same time, in the social field, he/she manifests his/herpowerful leader and organization capacity. Presently, these positions, he/shehas been taking in charge of in our school, the monitor of his/her class, thedirector of the youth volunteer of environmental protection over, he/she has various hobbies for example, playing the piano and Chinesecalligraphy. As an editor in our school magazine, his/her peculiar points ofview, fine style of writing, sense of humor often compose an excellent has issued many excellent essays in school magazine. His/Her remarkabletalent was appreciated by her teachers and schoolmates. Especially, in May,2008, he/she won the title of Excellent Work in XXXX Competition. This contestadequately shows his/her talent in art. Otherwise, he/she took actively part inall kinds of the social activities in his/her vacation, such as offering careto the olds in old people’s home, and leading various kinds of communityservice as a youth volunteer for propagating the theory of environmentalprotection in the street and cleaning the mother river of this city and these activities constantly improve his/her social practice ability.

Finally, I honestly recommend him/her to you, with the hopethat he/she can get the best chance to develop his/her enthusiasm as well astalents in your first-class university as to make his/her internationalizationintellectual. I will highly appreciate your favorable consideration of his/herapplication. Please feel free to contact me if there’s any further informationyou need.

Sincerelyyours,

(Principal) 校長

Date:

XXXX High School

　　一、正確使用英文

不論教授們的學識多麼淵博，都要通過為申請者撰寫留學推薦信，以合理的表達方式向考官們展現申請者的才能。也就是説連接着國內教授和國外考官的唯一渠道就是文字。如果留學推薦信寫的一塌糊塗，甚至出現用詞不準確、語法錯誤等低級失誤，給人家的第一印象就是你的英語水平不過硬，也就不會重視這封信了。

　　二、全面的、毫無保留的展示申請者的才能

考官們在申請者的推薦信中最想看的是申請者的專業背景程度。包括：對專業知識的掌握程度、是否有相關的工作經歷、在申請專業上有突出成績和建樹。教授們請注意，在具體的敍述中不要直截了當的寫出來，要表達出申請者為什麼要選擇該專業、申請者的工作到底是怎樣的、申請者是怎樣取得的成績等，要注重過程的描寫，這樣才會讓考官覺得真實自然。

　　三、全面提升自己的專業背景

教授們在撰寫推薦信時，尤其是在對申請者的專業背景進行介紹時，必然會用到一些專業術語的概念和解釋，如果術語的運用和解釋出現錯誤難免貽笑大方。對方會認為你不專業，也就不會重視你的推薦信了。因此教授在把推薦信教給學生前，要反覆閲讀，查漏補缺;同時繼續強化自身專業背景，尤其是對專業前沿的學習。