2017托福写作范文《在家办公》

托福考试的备考，作文是不能忽略的重点。尤其是托福作文经常会与一些社会上的热点话题联系在一起。因此考生在备考时，可多练习一些热点话题的托福写作。下面为大家带来一篇讨论在家办公的托福写作范文，供大家参考。

　Working at home using computers or telephones is better than working in the office.

In modern life, important inventions such as computers and telephones have exerted a significant effect on our daily life, especially the way of working. Recently there is a hot debate over the issue which is better, working at home using computers and telephones or working at the office. As far as I am concerned, I have preference for the former one with the following reasons.

First and foremost, working at home by using computers and telephones will benefit employees in many aspects. For one thing, this way of working enables employees to have more flexible working schedule. With the help of computers and telephones, staffs have easy access to the files and documents needed in the process of working on a project without going out. For another, the time and money spent in commuting between company and home can be saved. This is especially true of those people who live in the cities with heavy traffic. For example, many people working in Beijing have to get up very early in the morning to take the over-crowded subway or bus to their working places. This problem can be solved by working at home. Besides, working at home provides employees much more comfortable working environment. Compared with the narrow and separated working area, home is a better place with more space and less noise.

What’s more, employers will another beneficiary from the practice of working at home. On one hand, provided that more and more employees choose telecommuting, the company’s cost in office and equipments will drop dramatically. To be specific, the overhead of running a company include various bills, such as utilities, computers and office space, which will be saved by telecommuting. On the other hand, working independently at home will improve the working efficiency, which makes more profits for the company. According to a survey conducted by the department of psychology in Boston University, people will work more efficiently under the condition that there was no interruption from others. Thus the reduction of cost and the improvement of working efficiency are combined to earn more revenues for the employers.

Admittedly, some opponents may argue that working in office will enhance people’s social skills by communicating with colleagues and boss, while working at home may alienate the relationship with coworkers. However, the above reason does not bear further analysis. Working at home does not means that telecommuters at home have no chances to communicate with others. In fact, by using the electronic gadgets such as computers and phones, they are more likely to meet a larger group of people from all walks of life, thus acquiring stronger social skills.

From what has been discussed above, it is safe to draw a conclusion that it is much better to work at home using computers and telephones than to work in office

　　附：托福写作点拨：TS是每个论证段落的台面，只有台面漂亮干净了，一坨屎才肯赏脸。

你可以想象的到一坨屎改卷的时候跟大学联考老师一样苦逼么。天天对着电脑看成千上万的卷子。最恐怖的是everything almost identical，再如果他前天晚上刚和老婆/老公吵架，改卷子的时候心情极度不好，该怎么办?在这样恶劣的情况下，如果你还好死不死的放一条“又臭又长”的TS让他捉鸡，即便你的英语功底再好，句子再复杂再丰富，也逃不过潜在的厄运。相反的，如果是你，与思想简单，主谓宾齐全，表意清晰的TS，清清爽爽，逻辑顺畅的TS相比，你更喜欢哪个?答案不言而喻。说了那么多，只想告诉大家，TS不是体现复杂语言功底的利器，正相反，如果你要靠一句或两句TS抓住一坨屎的眼球，获得他们的青睐，那么你就是捡了芝麻，丢了西瓜了。毕竟，mainbody还是在后面。那么TS除了文章中的结构功能，还能有什么正面作用帮你快速获取ETS的青睐呢?

[屁股]的意见：

1)用词。在表意清楚的情况之下，动词或者形容词的替换非常重要。当然这个tip只能在你对一些单词的'用法非常confident的时候来使用，不然会产生反面的效应。一两个“小亮词”会让一坨屎惊艳哦，哈哈，这个针对paraphrase能力比较好，词汇量比较大的同志们还是挺有用的。

2)逻辑词。这个我不是非常在行，我知道的逻辑词也就那么几个。如果你在看文章的时候看到了比较native的逻辑词的话，那就用上吧。我估计一坨屎他们一天可以看上千个first, second, third, addtionally, apart from...

3)高度改写。把你接下来的表意高度概括成一句话，或换种方式表达。比如说在家里工作可以节约上班时间。一般人会直接这么translate上去，聪明人会换种更attractive的说法：Traffic jam may not become a tough problem to solve when working at home.这个例子不是太好。总之可以从正反两面给出你的论点。不过对于那些写作文经常“迂回”的同学，这条慎用!

4)如果以上你都觉得hold不住，没事儿，只要够简洁、够清晰、够明确，你就已经赢在了起跑线!