A message to my sir英语作文

Dear JasonI want to take part in the English Speech,which is “An Unforgettable Experience in High School” I do hope that you can give me some suggestions about I am concerned,I shouldpay attention to the writing of my ometimes my vocabulary is not to these problems.I want your suggestions about how to improve my English Writing use of the date of the Speech is this Sunday,so I hope you can give me themessage on Wednesday ugh the time is not enough,I can still make you give me suggestions,I will appreciate you very much.I am looking forward your early reply.